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Running head: CANE CORSO 1 The History of the Cane Corso

 

Kathryne Noel Olsen

 

ECPI University: Advanced Composition Online CANE CORSO 2

 

The History of the Cane Corso The Cane Corso id a very rare and peculiar breed of dog. They originated from the

 

ancient Roman Molossus, native to Italy. They are working dogs that were used as war dogs and

 

big game hunters. Now, ever since the 1980?s they have been used and seen as family

 

companions and guard dogs for families and farmers around the world.

 

Origination

 

From Roman Molossus and descendent of the ?Canis Pugnax? the world gives us the

 

Cane Corso, a large strong working dog often used in warfare. They have been used in warfare as

 

fighting dogs, and a lot more in hunting for wild game such as swine and boar. They also have

 

been known for being ?guard dogs? for families, farmers, and even watch guards. With their

 

great strength and agility, they have become a great use to the ancient romans. Cane Corsos go

 

by many names in the world, such as; Italian mastiffs, Italian corso dog, Italian corso, and cane

 

corso italiano. 2 1 CANE CORSO 3 As stated before due to the Corsos statute and agility they made great war dogs, hunters,

 

and family guard dogs. With tall muscular legs and a thick torso, weighing in between eighty to

 

one ?hundred pounds for a female and ninety-nine to one-hundred ten pounds for a male; they

 

could barrel into anything guarantee the assailant to go down. As shown in the photos below the

 

audience can observe the dimensions of the dog and see what they classify as perfect and also

 

fully understand there use back in the day and now. 3

 

4

 

Purpose

 

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Qualities

 

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paragraphs with their own headings, where appropriate.] CANE CORSO 4

 

Reasons to Own Cane Corsos aside from there very dominant

 

aggressive betrayal, they are sweet loving animals.

 

Even though in all research they have a ?high prey

 

drive? for smaller animals, as shown in the

 

photograph they can learn to love smaller animals

 

such as cats/kitten and smaller dogs. They are very

 

protective of their owners (as shown in top left

 

photo), and always stay alert. Which is a great trait

 

for a family with children. Even though they tend to

 

be major bed hogs, they are great cuddlers when you are feeling sick. Overall like stated in the

 

origination of Corsos, they are great family/guard dogs and are wonderful to have around. Must Know Information

 

A cane corso is not a dog you get for looks, such as do not get a cane corso if you want a

 

dog that makes you look more masculine or strong. Because once full grown can weigh

 

anywhere from eighty pounds to one-hundred and ten pounds and will need a lot of exercise and

 

a very experienced owner to train them cause as they a protective they will not like everyone

 

they meet at first glance. Cane Corsos also have three known possible medical issues dealing

 

with the bones, joints and eyes. For owners to be aware of and to look out for. They are; hip

 

dysplasia, degenerative joint disease, entropion, ectropion, and glandular hypertrophy. They have

 

very little shedding and can be just as happy living indoors as if living outdoors. They have to

 

have plenty exercise and can be a great running buddy. 5 5 CANE CORSO 5 Reasons to NOT own a Cane Corso CANE CORSO 6 There are many reasons not to own a Cane Corso and there

 

not for the human really, it?s for the dog. Cane Corso are very

 

strong willed dogs but they need a loving owner who will be in

 

their life till there last breath, not be put out for a dumb reason like

 

moving somewhere new or family not liking them. Dogs are smart

 

and can sense when someone is bad in a sort of way, so treat them

 

like family. If they don?t like a certain family member its for a

 

reason. Don?t get a corso if you just want to look manlier or more

 

muscular. They are big dogs and require attention and exercise. Do not own one if you can?t

 

afford to feed and provide proper health care and/or are too lazy to take the time to take them to

 

the vet and get the necessary testing and shots done. They eat large meals, for instant my corso

 

Buell eats about six cups of dog chow a day, plus his vitamin for his joints and his dental stuff.

 

Plus, I put special stuff in their water to keep their mouth clean and they get filtered water and

 

non-filler food with only all natural ingredients. It?s expensive but good care is what they

 

require. Do not get one if you think you can just

 

let them ?run free? with no supervision because

 

you?re too lazy to train them to not pull on a leash

 

or you just don?t want to deal with them. No dog

 

is safe running free in this world, not because of

 

the dog; but because of the dog and certain people

 

6 out in the world. Lastly, do not get a corso if yu dislike or don?t do daily exercises. They need it. It is important to their health to stay healthy and

 

fit and the daily exercise can also help with the hip dysplasia. 7 CANE CORSO 7 Example of Food Intake: Food

 

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60

 

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0 Bag of Food Daily Food Intake M onthly Food Intake Food As you can see from above, Buell eats 6 cups a day. There are only 61 cups in a bag of food (32

 

lb. bag). Meaning I need roughly three bags of food to feed him (not including my other dog and

 

kitten) for a month. If the food is $20.98 a bag, that means in a month I will have had to spend

 

$62.94 + tax on Buell in food alone. 8 9 CANE CORSO 8

 

References H. (n.d.). Cane Corso Dog Breed Information. Retrieved January 01, 2017, from

 

http://www.akc.org/dog-breeds/cane-corso/

 

Carosio, R. (n.d.). Cane Corso Dogs - History. Retrieved January 01, 2017, from

 

http://www.italicacanecorso.com/history.html

 

(2016, December 30). Retrieved January 01, 2017, from

 

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cane_Corso#History

 

C. (2003-2017). Cane Corso | History of. Retrieved January 01, 2017, from

 

http://www.canecorsovero.com/Breed/history.asp

 

Is a Corso right for you? (n.d.). Retrieved January 01, 2017, from

 

http://www.potrerocanecorso.com/is-a-corso-right-for-you.html

 

PetMD. (n.d.). Retrieved January 01, 2017, from

 

http://www.petmd.com/dog/breeds/c_dg_cane_corso

 

Picture References

 

(1) Kevlar Kennels, Cane Corso Mastiffs, Lorain, OH. (n.d.). Retrieved January 01, 2017,

 

from

 

http://kevlarkennels.net/index.asp?ID=47

 

(2) Molossus (dog). (n.d.). Retrieved January 01, 2017, from

 

http://www.snipview.com/q/Molossus_%28dog%29

 

(3) Galleryhip.com Galleryhip Website and Webhosting Information. (n.d.). Retrieved January

 

01, 2017, from http://galleryhip.com.ipaddress.com/

 

(4) Del Ecoussee Cane Corsos. (n.d.). Retrieved January 01, 2017, from

 

http://www.canecorsodelecousse.com/breedstandard.htm

 

(6) Olsen, K. N. (2016, November 11). Buell the Cane Corso. Retrieved January 1, 2017, from

 

https://www.facebook.com/kathryne.olsen/photos_all?

 

lst=100006100059300%3A100006100059300%3A1483273335 :Personal Photo from

 

facebook page.

 

(5) Olsen, K. N. (2016, December 26). Buell on Patio. Retrieved January 1, 2017, from

 

https://www.facebook.com/kathryne.olsen/photos_all?

 

lst=100006100059300%3A100006100059300%3A1483273335: Personal photo from

 

facebook, put into collage.

 

(5) Olsen, K. N. (2016, November 18). Buell and Autumn. Retrieved January 1, 2017, from

 

https://www.facebook.com/kathryne.olsen/photos_all?

 

lst=100006100059300%3A100006100059300%3A1483273335 Personal photo from

 

facebook, put into collage.

 

(5) Olsen, K. N. (2016, September 2). All on the Bed. Retrieved January 1, 2017, from

 

https://www.facebook.com/kathryne.olsen/photos_all?

 

lst=100006100059300%3A100006100059300%3A1483273335 Personal photo from

 

facebook, put into collage.

 

(5) Olsen, K. N. (2016, July 22). Drinking Water. Retrieved January 1, 2017, from

 

https://www.facebook.com/kathryne.olsen/photos_all?

 

lst=100006100059300%3A100006100059300%3A1483273335: Personal photo from

 

Facebook made into collage

 

(7) Olsen, K. N. (2014, December 15). Buell Puppy. Retrieved January 1, 2017, from

 

https://www.facebook.com/kathryne.olsen/media_set?

 

set=a.1572909092922411.1073741843.100006100059300&type=3: Personal photo

 

from facebook.

 

(8) Purina Dog Chow Natural Plus Vitamins & Minerals Dog Food 32 lb. Bag. (n.d.).

 

Retrieved January 01, 2017, from https://www.walmart.com/ip/Purina-Dog-Chow-

 


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